This is my horror story, it's not so good, but i think it's a nice work
It was a sunny but cold day, that day me, my mother and my father were going to spend some family time in a cabin that we had in a mountain, in a tall mountain. We started our journey to our cabin, and i was bored in the car, so i started to watch the outdoor landscape, and i noted some curious things like some cows and bulls and some weird houses, but i watched something else in the road, it was really fast, but i noted a big red spot in the grass, i don't know if it was just my imagination, but it seems that it was real, and i thinked in that moment; "What have i just seen?", but of course, i knew what i had seen. A big horror was the only thintg that i feeled in that moment, it was a strange kind of horror, i wanted to tell that to my parents, but i also wanted them not to know. I decided to don't tell them.
When we arrived to our cabin, i told myself: "It's ok, you're home", but i still feeled that horror, that image of a dead corpse in the middle of the grass, it's something that i will never forget. Whatever, i tried to forgot that and act normal, after all, i was in a looney cabin whit my father and mother, what can be wrong?
We spend the first 4 days like normal vacations days, the smile of my parets and our happy moments was the only important things in that moments for me, in some moments, i really forget the corpse. That 4 days was wonderfoul, like if i was in heaven. But the morning of the 5th day, that is something diferent.
Since we arrived i noted some weird noices coming from under the house, but i always thought that it was just animals, after all, it was a cabin on the middle of the nature, but in the 5th day, i finally knew what made that sounds. It was a normal morning, when my mother prepared the breakfast, and when i wake up, my parents told me it was our last day in the cabin. I was a little sad, but i said it's ok, and when my father finished eating his breakfast, he said he was going to walk around one last time and my mother said him that don't take too late. My father left the cabin and started to walk, and it was the last time that i saw him.
After 2 hours, my father did not return and my mother told me that she was beginning to worry, so she left the cabin and started to search my father. I was waiting that she and my father return laughing because my mother found my father in some funny problem, but it was not like that. After like 5 minutes i heared a scream, it was my mother. I ran in the direction of the scream, it cane from the back of the cabin, and when i arrived, i found a horrible scene: i found my mother screaming next to my fathers corpse, gutted, and then i watched a long trial of blood coming from the trees to my fathers corpse, and then, something happened, it was really fast, two tall and big deformed men ran in our direction and one caught my mother and other caught me, i screamed and tried to escape, but they was really strong, it was really fast, and in a moment, i was knocked out by that man.
I woke up in a chair, tied, next to my mother, who was still unconscious. I screamed and tried to escape, but one of the deformed men came out of the kitchen whit a knife, and he maked weird sounds, but i understand what he mean, so i kept silence. Soon, my mother woke up and i asked her if she was ok, but she started to cry and scream, and then that man maked that sounds again. I was really scared, and my mother was too, but she kept silence too. The man called the other man, and they started to make weird sounds and laughing of us, and in that horrible moment, one of them pull a piece of stomach out of a leather bag, and then, he bite it. My mother started to scream, and cry, and then i understand: they was eating my father. I wanted to scream and cry, but i didn't do it. One of the 2 men screamed and brought the knife closer to my mothers face, and i screamed and told them that they toke my life and not hers, and they laughed. They tortured us psychologically by days, eating my fathers corpse in pieces on front of us and forcing us to eat that, and if we don't do it, they stabed us un the hands or legs.
After some days, we was at the edge of the death, when one of those man arrived and let free my mother. She tried to run, but we was really weak in that moment, so she fell, and the man laughed, and then, the other one came out of the kitchen whit a butcher knife and he cuts my mothers head. I screamed when i saw that horrible scene, i feeled a horrible feeling, i cryed and the men was laughing, i feeled a big sadness, a big horror, and a big fury, i was screaming and trying to escape. I struggle so hard, that the chair that i was tied fell on the floor and it broke, i still had the broke armrests tied on my arms, so i got up, and i ran to one of those men and i stabed him whit the sharp part of one of the broken armrests, and he screamed. It was fast, like a flashlight, but i was shocked and happy at the same time. The dying deformed man fell, slow, and the other one screamed. In that moment, i felt a big inner wish of ran out, so i do it. I was really weak in that moment, but i turn my head, and by a second i watched one of the deformed men crying, screaming, whit the dead corpse of the other one in his arms. I ran all the mountain, trying to survive, but i was sure of something; from that day, i was not going to be the same. In a long time, i reached the lower part of the mountain, i felt that i was going to die, but whit my last life singal, i screamed so hard, it was really hard, hard enouhg so that the pearson in the nearest house heared me screaming. At that moment, i fell unconscious.
I woke up in the hospital, and a doctor said to me that i was a really strong boy, and that he regretted to told me that my parents was dead. I cryed, and i remembered everything, and i asked to the doctor that what happened whit the deformed men, and then, he told me something that i will never forget: "What are you talking about? There was no any deformed men, nothing", and i answered "Then one of them is still free, and i know that he will, come for me", and after that, i found it a little funny, and i laughed. At first just a little and quiet laugh, but then, it in a maniatic laugh, and then, i came out of my trance and i remembered everything: i have spend the last 10 years in a mind hospital, nobody believed me about the deformed men because there was not blood or something of any of them, and everyone thought that i become crazy and paranoic by watching how my parents was killed, but i knew that i was not, and that the other deformed man will come for me, and when that happens, i will be prepared. After that, i begined to think on some way to get out of that place, but my mind just maked me live just a same memory like if it was the first time over and over again, and then i fell on a trance again, and when i woke up i was there again.
It was a sunny but cold day, that day me, my mother and my father were going to spend some family time in a cabin that we had in a mountain, in a tall mountain...
This is how my story ends, what do you think of it? Is it good? I'm sorry if it's a little long, but i tried to make a really scary storie. Please let you're oppinions in the coments and thanks for reading, good bye.